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Through androgynous hips
I leak power
Over thought,
As the line blurs
It becomes curved
Depending on the day of the week,
My back straight
I articulate
In a monotone tone
Just where my genders flown,
There’s no classification for me
Why yes
Technically
I am a female
And I’m extremely cool with that
I’d rather be me
Than be stuck as a man
In your gender classified
Barbie / ken doll mold
Roles of societies norm–perfected,
I have rejected
My pink dress
And I will not
Wear a blue suite
I’d rather wear my purple
With its rainbow back drop
And stripes of black
With a sweet pretty girl seated on my lap.
©2007-2009 ~13lithiums
:icon13lithiums:

Author's Comments

This is for the gay boys and the straight girls who wonder.
and to Animal the original boy/girl wonder

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:iconmystikwrytr:
the last line is the best. you have a certain style that makes me happy.

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It feels like Independence Day
And I can't break away from this parade
:peace:
icon by ~Laehlani
:icon13lithiums:
Thanks, the last lines my fav aswell, and this is a pretty happy poem, so im glad it made you happy.

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Save a cow eat a dykE :pride: :peace:
:icon13lithiums:
Thanks, i try ;)

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Save a cow eat a dykE :pride: :peace:
:iconmystikwrytr:
when i write, i use the last few lines to make my impression. more people remember the end over the beginning.

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It feels like Independence Day
And I can't break away from this parade
:peace:
icon by ~Laehlani
:iconlynielle:
damn this is awsome must perform it someday

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Jocelyn

....Just another butt in the ashtray
:iconsage-gnosis:
your style has a really nice flow to it. The fact that the pacing is just right; not rushed or even forced sounding. Your word choice is splendid and I like how you maintain a boundless atmosphere towards gender. Great job
:iconabsumoaevum2:
"As the line blurs
It becomes curved
Depending on the day of the week,
My back straight
I articulate"

I like that. That's a fair little section.
I usually don't like rhymes, but I like the "ur" rhyme in blurs and curved, and "straight/articulate". Well done.

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Dulce et decorum est pro patria mori.

Bullshit.

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